Hm.
Out of focus and an over used joke. I like the idea of the comic, all though you should have more objects to make an environment. Green grass and a purple wall?
I can imagine that the wall is the 'corner store' , so that's not all bad. I'm just saying, you can't do a lot with Legos, and because of their size, I can under stand why it's unfocused. You might want an actual 35mm camera that you can focus if you wanted to pull off a comic like this.